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.:My Poems:. ~By Simone
« Thread Started on Jun 25, 2008, 3:18pm »

Ok, I've written some poetry & since I'm able to post it here, I'm going to let you read it and you can vote on whether you like it or not. And you post your comments on here. I'm eager to hear what you think of them.

^{Contemplating The Heart
.:[ D É B U T (Start) ]:.

Moon is fading,
Teardrops falling,
Darkness & daylight meet.
Swans are flying,
Sun is rising.
I sit along and weep.

Hearts are touched,
Always smiling.
Hearts are broken,
Cold and dying.
Some live out their hopes and dreams,
My heart is breaking through its seam.
Locked inside- my little spark, longing to be free,
But can't be opened without a key.

The key to my heart just won't fit,
No one can unlock it.
My spark fades away like embers,
Lost and forgotten,
No one remembers.
I look up into the sky,
The sun soaring into the clouds.
Children playing,
People laughing.
Every brightness,
Every beam of light,
Creates a shadow, still,
The Darkness,
Deathly; Unreal.
This heart has sunken far to deep,
My memories to keep.

.:[ F I N (End) ]:.

Notes~ Not really any right now. Just so you know, I'm not depressed and this isn't the way I feel on a day-to-day basis

Am I Alive? (Freeverse)

.:[ D É B U T (Start) ]:.

I feel the moonlight on my cheek
Midnight wraps arounds me
Matches light the stars and flitter
Lost, yet content, and isolated in my own being
A tear in the fabric to reality
Love swarms me, closing my eyes, I sink into its arms
I am apart of the world, the universe, as life seems to evanesce
Time is meek...
Awareness is slipping...
Consciousness ripples across the surface of a dream
Gripping faith, walking in the shadow of my essence
'Conceptualize the wisdom, not the experience'
I let go
I let this darknesss wake me up
Only to reach night's eternity

.:[ F I N (End) ]:.

Notes~ Ok, in the line saying 'A tear in the fabric to reality,' the word 'tear' isn't tear like a tear drop that you get from crying, but a tear like something being torn. OK? Oh, and also, one of the last lines saying 'I let this darkness wake me up,' doesn't mean that the whole thing or rather experience is bad and dark and evil. The narrator (I wrote the poem, but just pretend that there's another person telling it, spilling out the emotions to you via this piece of poetry) of the poem is thinking that this whole thing is a dream, and when your dream ends, it darkens and fades away, kind of like pulling the curtain. I hope that makes things a little clearer.}OK, here's a sidenote.
I am currently finishing 4 more poems. They are...

"Today I sing"
2.
"Broken""
3.
"10 Times The Universe"
4.
"Wicked Love Intwined"

I'll be posting them here. You can look forward to them, as I will be completing all 4 of them soon. Any updates about this matter will be posted here. Thank you for reading.
Kind Regards, Simone

« Last Edit: Jun 25, 2008, 3:39pm by Simone »

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Re: .:My Poems:. ~By Simone
« Reply #1 on Jun 25, 2008, 11:01pm »

I liked them all, but the second one was the best.

I liked that one, the emotions in it are very nice.

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« Reply #2 on Jun 25, 2008, 11:38pm »

Thank you. I'm almost done with 'Today I Sing.'

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« Reply #3 on Jul 21, 2008, 4:54pm »

Well, good luck with that! Are you ever going to publish it?

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« Reply #4 on Jul 21, 2008, 5:12pm »

No, I doubt it.
Would you do that with your poetry?? I don't know, I just really don't think I'd have time to do that, but I plan on publishing my novel. That's about it...

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